just fix the mistakes that i have and be sure you fix the grammar.

Do not change the main idea or anything just go through the paper and fix the mistakes besides my instructors feedback.

the pdf file shows some of the mistakes. but generally you have to go over all the paper cuz my instructor didnt checked the whole paper

in the screen shot you can see what my instructor commented.

if there is anything you need more to know tell me

Do you need a similar assignment done for you from scratch? We have qualified writers to help you. We assure you an A+ quality paper that is free from plagiarism. Order now for an Amazing Discount!
Use Discount Code "Newclient" for a 15% Discount!

NB: We do not resell papers. Upon ordering, we do an original paper exclusively for you.